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Laura B.'s avatar

Thank you for sharing this oh, so beautiful moment. Your words are reminding me to tend the soil of my life and love this place I am in despite ... um, all the things that make me take the ordinary moments for granted.

Ann Bodling's avatar

Thank you for this, James. Those first soft moments of spring are like resurrection, aren't they?

Alegria de Rose's avatar

What a precious moment you describe James. His hand on your arm, allowing the noticing of the magic in the ordinary. Thank you for this.

Julie Potiker's avatar

Culvert, cattails, clover - such wonderful alliteration. And all of it, really a gorgeous reminder. There’s a specific feeling that I can’t describe in words, that you regularly achieve, like a magic trick, a magical touch, soft, and comforting. Thank you. 🙏

Clyde Watson's avatar

A beautiful moment, beautifully expressed in the poem -- my favorite line is "when he touches my arm as if to say, Wait," because it's so immediate.

Janet Lucy's avatar

I love the prompt!!! Thank you 🙏💖✍️

Raymon Cunha's avatar

Good morning James! So happy to join your Substack community! Thanks for all the gentle nurture you invoke in our poetic lives.

MK Creel's avatar

Oh, that red-winged blackbird song. I can hear it now.

The Sawyer's Daughter's avatar

I’m there with you, friend. Beautiful!

Marisol Muñoz-Kiehne's avatar

Redwing, breath call “wait!,”

“take refuge” in “bare moment.”

Cozy warm real here.