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Daisy J Fable's avatar

I love your poem and reflection on the nature of daffodils. I was also inspired by the daffodils this week, their bright yellow cheeriness (naivety?) against the cold snow. Here's my little altar poem:

the snow teases the sun

dancing, light as powdered sugar

dusting the daffodil’s optimism

James Crews's avatar

I love that powdered sugar image, Daisy--takes away the sting of the cold snow.

Amrita Skye Blaine's avatar

Just gorgeous, James. Your prose as well. Love to you both.

James Crews's avatar

Thank you, dear friend--we send love right back!

Kassi Wilson's avatar

Beautiful imagery.

Breath of Freedom Poetry's avatar

Wow! Powerful last line there. Lovely.